Today I swam fast
With the shoals of busy fishes
In endless limbo
P.s. that’s my experience of shopping in “sales season” summed up. My last brain cells mustered up all their strength to come up with this forced haiku for you all.
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Written for OctPoWriMo 2018.
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I wish I knew how to write haiku
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This is my 2nd haiku ever 😂 I still dont know if it qualifies for a poem
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I know its something to do with syllables. .not sure how x
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First line 5 syllables
2nd 7
3rd line 5 syllables again.
There are syllable counter websites to help too.
It’s hard to make sense with few words. X
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Thanks 5-7-5 will try and remember!
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Please do. Would love to read it 🙂
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☺☺☺
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Trying to outpace the fish, or keep in tandem with them?
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keeping in tandem was a safer strategy. paces myself to stay in the middle.
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Great poem 🙂
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Thank you 🙂
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Most welcome 🙂
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